Jessica KSherry,
I don’t find anything wrong with the letter either. My daughter spent the night with my parents one night for my husbands birthday & my letter for my mom & dad was about the same. I handed it to them & laughing said "Yep, your anal daughter has a letter" That way if they were upset for any reason, they could just blame it on me being overprotective. However, my mom was glad to have everything written out so she did not have to try & remember...it’s not second nature to them like it is to us.
Good luck in the labor room!!! May it be quick & easy!!
Jess